Narrative

Narrative Assessment

Create a narrative for adult audience with traditional tale features which you will be able to perform for construct a new narrative aimed at an adult audience.

Filled with panic, as I entered the administration office, the petite Chinese lady told me to wait on the dark and spooky chair. Sitting there I remembered what had happened a week earlier. It was too obvious; after the incident at school my parents were adamant about sending me to the boarding school hoping to get a sense of discipline within my life. I could not believe in the wildest of my imagination that my parents would take such a drastic step for something so petty. It wasn't that I was not happy about finally going away from them even once included me in what was perhaps one of the most important decisions of my life that bothered me the most.

We had reached America last night and today we were going to visit New York, the big apple! We were going to visit the boarding school there. The place was rather confusing from the inside; it took ages for me to cross the long stretch of corridors. As a result I had to just stroll behind my parents the whole time. It was very annoying at first. But that's when I made the biggest mistake of my life, although I was mature enough not to do it still, I got attracted by the huge crowd outside the school. I just couldn't resist my curiosity and proceeded towards the fascinated crowd. Then, just as I turned back my parents were nowhere to be seen.

And now I had ended up in the administration office with the help of a kind gentleman. I waited anxiously for someone to come over. At last, after three long hours, I was able to meet my parents and seeing them, my happiness knew no bounds. This few minutes of chaos made me realize how attached I was to my parents. So I mustered up all of my courage and had a heart to heart talk with my parents, promising them that I would try to change my habits and be a person that they would be proud of.

Critical reflection of narrative for adult audience with traditional tale features

My tale is typically a result of the influence of a popular fairy tale Hansel and Gretel originated from Germany and recorded and published by the Grimm Brothers in the year 1812. One of the key elements ...