Elements Missing From the Revised Literature Pieces
The revised forms of all the three provided literature pieces have the same elements missing. These include the use of a formal language appropriate for any form of literature writing be it a poem, an essay or a story. Therefore, all the three revised literature pieces are although written or presented in such a manner that the basic theme highlighted by the original literature piece is mentioned. However, the words, phrases and the overall language and tone adapted by the author are too casual to be used for writing literature pieces. In addition, ...