Health Care Reform

Health Care Reform

Introduction

This paper intends to discuss the relationship between my original (creative) project and some of the theoretical or scholarly ideas from the text. This paper will prove to be a useful tool to assist the original essay. Different facets of communication will also be examined.

Discussion

The original (creative) project experience is examined under some of the major themes, issues and ideas from the course contents. The essay that is being examined is related to the topic of health reforms in United States of America during the 18th century. The essay is basically a research proposal which intends to propose a research related to health care reforms that took place in the 18th century in United States of America. Being a research proposal, the normal essay pattern is not followed. The emphasis is kept on the research being proposed and its importance to the health care sector.

The language and the structure of the essay seem to be extremely cohesive. Cohesiveness is measured in the sense of connecting all the parts of the essay together seamlessly. The essay seems to be sticking around the topic of health reforms initiated in the 18th century. All the paragraphs of the essay are logically and interestingly connected. The paragraphs are well structured. Proper paragraphing is used throughout the essay. The punctuation and capitalization is given considerable importance in the essay. Sentences are well structured and cohesive in nature.

There is no strong thesis statement in the paper. Despite of having a succinct thesis statement, the essay possesses a problem statement. The introductory paragraph seems to support and build cohesiveness with the rest of essay. However, the thesis statement is not good enough to summarize whole of the author's arguments and main discussion points. The essay seems to lack a strong and succinct thesis statement. The introduction paragraph seems to really ordinarily structure but at the same time it provides an overview of the essay. Introduction makes the reader inform that the paper is about the health care reforms initiated in 18th century within the United States of America. Furthermore, the introduction paragraph makes the author aware that the essay will revolve around the main factors that influence the health care reforms in United States of America.

The essay is structured in a cohesive manner. The essay starts with a brief introduction and than a background about the health reforms in America during the 18th ...