In this paper, I am going to do commentary on myself this critique will help me to be a better presenter since I have seen some good and bad in my presentation. I have been giving presentations throughout my school time. Some of them went well, but most of them could not be better as expected. The most embarrassing thing is that I prepare persuasive speeches rehearse it and do good ,but when the time comes to face the audience and speak in front of them my mouth dries instantly, my heart starts ...