PORTFOLIO ASSIGNMENT

Portfolio Assignment

Portfolio Assignment

Portfolio Assignment

The commonality between all these three essays is that they are all addressed to the same kind of audience. Teenagers and undergraduates are the core audience to which these three essays are targeted at. When I went through these essays, I found out certain issues in them which needed attention. The first one being the fact that the sentence structure needs to be worked upon and it needs improvement. The flow is not entirely there. So in order to make it more appropriate and thoughtful, all the essays should be rewritten keeping in mind the issues they are facing. The overall structure and flow of the essay should be improved upon, and it should be written in such a way that the reader should not get distracted and bored while reading it. The flow of the paragraphs will also be worked upon while rewriting the essays as it is not linking one paragraph to the other.

I also believe that I was able to communicate my purpose of writing the essay quite well in two write ups but not in the third one. So the third essay needs to be written again in order to communicate the purpose of writing. Apart from that, in the essay named “Volunteering”, further content could have been added in order to show the different dynamics of the topic to the reader. Whereas in the rest of the papers, the content is appropriate. There should be a consistency in essay writing. From tenses to noun arrangement, everything should be synchronized. Logic is the most crucial aspect. It should have been made sure that the essay writing reflects the logical aspect of your thinking. Therefore, all these tips should be considered while rewriting or revising the essays.

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