PAPER EVALUATION

Paper Evaluation



Paper 1

Ans (1): Yes, the Problem Statement is acceptable because it explains the scenario in an acceptable way as is reflected from this one paragraph. “This effort to address spirituality within the context of Army service can be viewed as a search for suitable workplace spirituality for the Army. Yet, there is virtually no literature exploring the spirituality and resilience of soldiers. The Army needs to know the current situation in order to plan a way forward.”

Ans (2): Yes, addressing the Problem makes a contribution to theory as this often seems to be the most misunderstood element of wellness. Since wellness is not a substitute to religion, no particular doctrines, values, or rituals are to be 'sold' by wellness professionals. The spiritual dimension in one's life is a very personal matter, and there will always be a great deal of variety among individuals. One's spiritual life may consist of total involvement in a particular religion; it may be partially religious and partly secular (or natural); it may be a combination of religions and philosophies; it may be purely philosophical; or it could be very perceptive and individually creative. For the sake of health and happiness (apart from the philosopher meticulous search for truth), it does not really matter whatever works for you. The wellness movements can only serve as a guideline in your quest for a spiritual life. We may offer some clues, but that's all. The rest is up to you to search, explore, experiment, and cultivate throughout your lifetime.

Ans (4): No, it is not acceptable, as it is not explaining clearly the purpose. For example this paragraph is not indicating towards the actual purpose of the topic. “This will contribute to the Army's understanding of soldier spirituality and aid in future plans to assess and develop programs to increase resilience and spiritual strength. It will contribute to the literature on workplace spirituality and resilience. It will also contribute to the understanding of other variables which may moderate levels of spirituality and resilience”.

Ans (8): Topic paper can be improved in a number of ways. It can be improved by emphasizing more on other issues like health and wellness of the Army etc. Some more factors should also be used to discuss here like age, sex, rank, years of military service, religious background, marital status, race and ethnicity etc so as to improve the quality of the given ...