(1) The chief claim of the paper is that the overweight persons should have to pay extra charges for their weight to airplanes as they used to sit on two or one and a half seat. In such situation they should have to pay charges for more than one seat.
This thesis statement has demonstrated the issue a little bit clearly but it requires more clarification in the sense that some more angle of issue should also be reflected from the statement.
(2) The topic is “diverse seats on airplanes” and the writer ...